I was going to the jedi temple to start my trainingbut there was no one there so i decided to find someone. I left the temple to look for people i found a clone so i ask him if he knew where some jedi were he he dident know were some jedi were so i decided to keep on looking. I saw battel droid so i got out my light saber and cut it and then carry on looking. I found obi wan kenobi but he busy so i left him i decided i’m going to betray the jedi and become a sith lord.
hay Slaine.
ReplyDeleteI liked you writing about what it like to be a jedi. I do think that you should look over it and make shore it makes sense though because i saw two he's next to each other.But in the end its realy good and keep up the good work.
Cooper.B
when i said I liked you writing about what it like to be jedi I meant I liked your writing about what it's like to be a jedi. Dam I told you to look over your writing and i'm not being a very good role model l.o.l
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LoL very Funny Cooper
DeleteHello Slaine
ReplyDeleteI like your jedi writing story about it going to a temble and explored alot in the story and going to different places and talking to others :D
Hello Slaine.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used many aspects of star wars. I like how at the end you decided to change to a Sith lord. By the way training and but have no space between them.
From Robert.
Thankes Robert I did notice that
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