writing w7. what would you change at pcs

 for term 1 week 7 our topic was change at papakura central school and here is my writing.

If i change the school i would add a canopy to the senior court but first i need to find how to get the money and the builders and it might have to be during the school holidays so then its not in the way of the students and teachers. So first i decided how to get the money, maby i could do a school fundraising to get the money for the senior canopy now i just need to find how to get the builders i can call some but i need to figure out which are the best to get. I can get the builders that did the middle school canopy but there were days they were here and days they weren't here so then they might take awhile so that will be a bad idea so i think it might have to happen another time.