Hi Slaine Great work evaluating the two houses, you noticed many of the details. What a orginal idea to come up with the eco-train. I like how you used an emotive word (transform) in your slogan. Well done, Miss Hudson
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Hi Slaine
ReplyDeleteGreat work evaluating the two houses, you noticed many of the details. What a orginal idea to come up with the eco-train. I like how you used an emotive word (transform) in your slogan.
Well done,
Miss Hudson
My train is based off a character from The Transformers The Movie 1986
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