this week for writing was we had to make a story about one day i woke with superpowers
I woke up with super powers
One morning I just woke up but something was different. I had super powers. The superpowers I had were invisibility, teleportation, shape shift, god mode, jump boost, and speed boost. I decided to go and get dressed and then have breakfast with these cool new powers so then i told me family about my new powers but none of them believed me. So first i told my older sister i had invisibility powers she didn't believe me so then i showed her by standing in front of her then asking her to turn around then look back and i would be behind her and tapped on her back and her mind was blowen. Then i told other older sister that i could teleport she didn't believe me as well so then i told her to look at the roof and then i teleported onto the roof and then she was shocked then i decided to tell my mum i could shape shift she thought i was lying so then i changed into a WOLF! Then i then i went to my dad and teleported onto a plane flying above out house my dad said i was going to die then i jumped down and didn't die! He was so surprised then i told everyone me and my sister would have a race with obstacles we had to pass then everyone was surprised i was running so fast and jumping realy high then we had to do 5 laps around our entire house and i won in 50 seconds and my sister 5 minutes then gave up. Then they all believed me so we all got an ice cream by me teleporting to the ice cream shop and all decided that i only use my powers in realy important time and keep a secret.
One morning I just woke up but something was different. I had super powers. The superpowers I had were invisibility, teleportation, shape shift, god mode, jump boost, and speed boost. I decided to go and get dressed and then have breakfast with these cool new powers so then i told me family about my new powers but none of them believed me. So first i told my older sister i had invisibility powers she didn't believe me so then i showed her by standing in front of her then asking her to turn around then look back and i would be behind her and tapped on her back and her mind was blowen. Then i told other older sister that i could teleport she didn't believe me as well so then i told her to look at the roof and then i teleported onto the roof and then she was shocked then i decided to tell my mum i could shape shift she thought i was lying so then i changed into a WOLF! Then i then i went to my dad and teleported onto a plane flying above out house my dad said i was going to die then i jumped down and didn't die! He was so surprised then i told everyone me and my sister would have a race with obstacles we had to pass then everyone was surprised i was running so fast and jumping realy high then we had to do 5 laps around our entire house and i won in 50 seconds and my sister 5 minutes then gave up. Then they all believed me so we all got an ice cream by me teleporting to the ice cream shop and all decided that i only use my powers in realy important time and keep a secret.
Hi Slaine
ReplyDeleteWow cool story line. Great work with your commas for listing. Please check you have all of your captials in the right place. Well done!
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