term 3 week 2 writing persuasive letter

 this week for writing our topic is doing a persuasive letter here is mine hope you like it

letter School pool

23 ray small drive

Papakura

Auckland

Nz 

3rd august 2021

Principle

Papakura central school

Auckland

Nz

To Mr Tetzlaff 

The reason i am writing this letter to you is because the school pool is to small for me sometimes. When ever our class goes to the pool it nearly goes up to my waist because it’s to shallow i would like there to be two pool’s at school. The one that we already have and another one that is two meter’s deep so then the tall people can have fun too. When i’m swimming my face can sometimes get to close to the ground. The ground in thew pool can sometimes be realy sharp and scratch my my foot wich hurts. So the only thing i’m asking you is to make there be two school pools one shallow and one deep.

Your’s sincerely Slaine.