world worst children writing week 10 term 2

 here is my writing for this week/last week of term 2

Worlds Worst Children

Please don’t read or your life will be gone… Full of bad things…

Once upon a time there was a very smart kid called Nerdy Nathan. He is so smart that he is already in college and he’s ten but this is a story about how he became dumb.

One day when Nathan was at home he decided to see why the town was being so loud when he got to town he said something so smart the town did not even know what it meat. Then Nerdy Nathan got a good idea… Nathan wanted to met someone like him someone who is naughty. While Nathan was walking in town he met some bullies they started a fight with Nerdy Nathan but Nathan goes through this every day so he knows their every move he doged all the hits and knocked out all the bullies and keep on searching for someone to be bad with him. After hours of searching he decided to to go back home and sleep. In the morning there was a suspicious knock on the door so he got dressed and went downstairs to the living room and opened the door and found someone slippery as slime and his name is Slippery Stanley. Stanley was so slippery that when ever he went down the stairs he would slip. When Stanley and Nathan were walking around the house trying to find something they have in comen they found something old. They went to town but as soon as they put their foot outside the door they got trapped in a cage and they cant get out and then something that looked like a gun got put in front of Nathans face Nathan thought he was going to die but instead he was dumb and Slippery Stanley slip out of the cage and never to be seen again.

what part did you like this was three pages in my book and took two days to make in my book.