Hi Slaine, Great work on this slide, keep up the great work! Next time, could you add some explaining of what those leaves would look like more, that would make it better. And can you explain more about autumn? That would also make it better too. Good work!
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i liked your bagground and i like the way you hilighted your writing.
ReplyDeleteSlaine, I love your use of the comma in the sentence 'brown, orange and yellow leaves'. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteHi Slaine,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on this slide, keep up the great work! Next time, could you add some explaining of what those leaves would look like more, that would make it better. And can you explain more about autumn? That would also make it better too.
Good work!